Sports vs Music

I’m learning to use a variety of sentence types for effect. What I need to work on is using short punchy sentences and commas for phrases. I think I am good at using complex, compound and simple sentences and using semicolons and colons.

• Simple,compound and complex sentences
• Commas for phrases
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• Short punchy sentences for impact

• Use colon and semicolon

Sports vs Music

I think that music is more important than sports. Do you agree? I do. I agree that music is more important because listening to music can help your body, can motivate you and help you learn new languages. Just imagine a world without music. It would be so boring. That's why I think music is more important than sports.

Firstly, I think that music is more important than sports because listening to music can help your body. I know that sports can help your body. because it can make you healthy and fit. But a magnificent article has shown that music in particular can help with more common diseases. Such: as short-term and long-term dementia, Parkinson's disease and can help lower blood pressure. But on the other hand sports makes your blood pressure go higher and also if you're healthy and fit, you could still have a disease like Parkinson's disease. That's why I totally agree that music is more spectacular than sports ; also in sports you can get injured this is so tragic.

Secondly, I think that music is more important than sports because music motivates people. Music definitely motivates me. I think that music, especially hip hop, is really extraordinary. Don’t you think? I really love music because it motivates me. Does it motivate you? For example whenever I run I like to listen to music because it makes me want to run harder. Every time I want to give up I play a song that will motivate me. But sports dosen’t do this if anything it makes you tired. It makes you want to give up.

Thirdly, I think that music is more important than sports because music can help you learn new languages. Do you want to know new languages? I sure do. Playing songs that have different languages can help you to learn new languages. Music is so spectacular,exquisite and terrific. Don’t you think so?  I listen to songs that have all sorts of languages and it really helps. Music teaches me new words and every time I listen to a new song I learn something new. But listening to music also helps younger children because you can play songs like the ABC song and so much more there is such a variety. With sports it is a lot more difficult to learn new languages. So that's why I say music is more important than sports it is so much easier to learn new languages and music is just full of joy.

In summary I think that music is more important than sports because, as I have said before music helps your body, music helps motivate you and music can teach you new languages.