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Monday, July 3, 2017

e-rase your e-waste


WALT write cause and effect sentences
To be successful we will:

  1. Think about an cause (event) and what happens because of it (effect)
  2. Use cause and effect connectives such as because of this, as a result, as a consequence and when this happens…
  3. Check that full stops are at the end of the idea (remember it will be simple, compound or complex)
Workers making chips are actually putting their lives at risk. People in the factory assembling computers get sick alot and are more likely to die from blood,kidney and brain cancer. Women also could have 40% more miscarriages. Factories have alot of toxics. As a result, they’re putting their lives at risk.

I think I was successful because I used a cause and effect sentence in my writing and I done everything in the success criteria. What was Hard for me was writing the cause and effect sentences.

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